*NebetSeta wishes for more constructive & extensive critiques.

Messed UpMessed Up
I present myself, honest and true
I am rejected, through and through
I am okay for a moment
I am then fearful and skeptical, anger foments
I proceed to question
I must sit and wait, a painful procession
I am in darkness; no future is bright
I am guaranteed no light
I grab ahold of my only solace, stuffing self with emptiness
I wear emptiness all over my body, no lasting fullness
I reap the seeds of others? discontent
I look at my reflection, does it misrepresent
I am tired of the fight, mind and body filled with contempt
I proceed to ask if there is any end to my torment
I grab ahold of my only solace, stuffing self w

Just head on down on give some nice constructive critiques, and report back here when you do! 

FF-02: Critique Theory + TechniqueCritiquing Systems
Here are a few techniques + approaches to improve
the quality and helpfulness of your critiques!

Critiquing could almost be an art form in and of itself! It's complex, but needs to be accessible. It can be approached from many different perspectives; there are no right answers. In essence, critique is like collaborative problem solving!
You as critic work with an artist to identify a problem (maybe one that they themselves are unaware of), then you work together to find a solution to it. They communicate through their existing body of work, and the technique they've developed or concept they've expressed. You communicate through your observations, impressions, and suggestions!This guide is designed to give you some new ideas about how you might approach your critiques from a different angle! It contains questions for you to ask, as well as tec
(here's some pointers for giving a critique)
Here are a few techniques + approaches to improve
the quality and helpfulness of your critiques!
Critiquing could almost be an art form in and of itself! It's complex, but needs to be accessible. It can be approached from many different perspectives; there are no right answers. In essence, critique is like collaborative problem solving!
You as critic work with an artist to identify a problem (maybe one that they themselves are unaware of), then you work together to find a solution to it. They communicate through their existing body of work, and the technique they've developed or concept they've expressed. You communicate through your observations, impressions, and suggestions!This guide is designed to give you some new ideas about how you might approach your critiques from a different angle! It contains questions for you to ask, as well as tec








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