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31 Days of Wishes: Day 22

Sat Dec 22, 2012, 2:02 PM by James--Steele


NebetSeta wishes for more constructive & extensive critiques.



Messed UpMessed Up
I present myself, honest and true
I am rejected, through and through
I am okay for a moment
I am then fearful and skeptical, anger foments
I proceed to question
I must sit and wait, a painful procession
I am in darkness; no future is bright
I am guaranteed no light
I grab ahold of my only solace, stuffing self with emptiness
I wear emptiness all over my body, no lasting fullness
I reap the seeds of others? discontent
I look at my reflection, does it misrepresent
I am tired of the fight, mind and body filled with contempt
I proceed to ask if there is any end to my torment
I grab ahold of my only solace, stuffing self with emptiness
I wear emptiness all over my body
I am a mess
 Farm # 1 by NebetSeta  Hands by NebetSeta   The Plushie Series - Unicorn by NebetSeta

Just head on down on give some nice constructive critiques, and report back here when you do! :heart:

FF-02: Critique Theory + TechniqueCritiquing Systems
Here are a few techniques + approaches to improve
the quality and helpfulness of your critiques!
:nod:
Critiquing could almost be an art form in and of itself! It's complex, but needs to be accessible. It can be approached from many different perspectives; there are no right answers. In essence, critique is like collaborative problem solving!
You as critic work with an artist to identify a problem (maybe one that they themselves are unaware of), then you work together to find a solution to it. They communicate through their existing body of work, and the technique they've developed or concept they've expressed. You communicate through your observations, impressions, and suggestions!This guide is designed to give you some new ideas about how you might approach your critiques from a different angle! It contains questions for you to ask, as well as tec
(here's some pointers for giving a critique)

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LoneRobin Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And one more [link]
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LoneRobin Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
[link]
Did my best on this one, but she's already fantastic.
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wouldn't you like to try on a more recent piece instead?
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LoneRobin Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
There really aren't. But I did do another one on a photograph.
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Nameda Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
I have tried my first critique ever, I hope she doesnt hate me for it.
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please link here~
(here's some pointers on critiques in case you feel nervous about it [link] )
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Nameda Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
[link] I did one but it doesnt show on her deviation yet, seems she didnt like it
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
We've been having a few issues with critique wishes because of the way some have been done although someone did note us with a really well done one so I think I'll move it to granted (please don't feel discouraged because she hasn't read it yet)
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Nameda Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
it appears on my page though I would be grateful to get a comment if my critique was ok :)
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hopefully she'll say something
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